This above is what people responded to my class pitch. As you can see two people obviously did could not find two positive points to my pitch which, personally, I thought was just laziness as it wasn't that hard to find two good point. Although I have taken this on the chin and I will progress from there feedback and continue on with the work, editing it it according to what people think by the feedback.
You need to put this feedback alongside your pitch so that your readers can see the links between the two.
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